10 Great Headline Rewrites (10 Ways to Turn a Bland Headline Into an Eye-Catcher)
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Your headline is the most important part of your article, blog post, sales page, landing page, and offer.
Most people use the headline to decide whether to read any further, so if you have bland headline, you’re going to have low readership and conversions.
That’s why you need to come up with something eye-catching and snappy.
Sounds like a lot of work, doesn’t it?
It would be… if you didn’t have these ten headline templates!
Go ahead and swipe them, modify them and use them …
Examples:
- Seven Surefire Ways to Lose Weight.
- Three Surefire Ways Get 100 Backlinks
- 101 Surefire Ways to Impress Your Date
Examples:
- Three Simple Steps to Beautiful, Shiny Hair
- Five Simple Steps to Banking More Cash With Your Blog
- Seven Simple Steps to Writing a Profit-Pulling Sales Letter
Examples:
- How to Housetrain a Sheepdog in Just 72 Hours!
- How to Lose Ten Pounds in Just One Month!
- How to Find Your Soul Mate in Just Three Months!
Examples:
- Here’s What Your Dentist Doesn’t Want You to Know About Whitening Your Teeth at Home!
- Here’s What the Judge Doesn’t Want You to Know About Beating Your Speeding Ticket!
- Here’s What Your Vet Doesn’t Want You to Know About Natural Home Remedies!
Examples:
- The Three Secrets to Landing Your Dream Job!
- The Ten Secrets of Throwing a Great Dinner Party!
- The Seven Secrets of Becoming a Better Archer!
Examples:
- The Truth About Homeschooling
- The Truth About Getting Rid of Acne
- The Truth About Making Money With AdSense
Examples:
- Here’s a Surprisingly Simple Way to Catch More Fish
- Here’s a Surprisingly Simple Way to Triple Your Sales Page Response
- Here’s a Surprisingly Simple Way to Beat Your Competition
Examples:
- Who Else Wants to Bowl a Perfect Game?
- Who Else Wants to Write a New York Times Best-Selling Novel?
- Who Else Wants to Lose Ten Pounds Before Summer?
Examples:
- Are You Paying Too Much for Car Insurance? Take This Quiz to Find Out…
- Do You Have the Mindset of an Entrepreneur? Take This Quiz to Find Out…
- Will You Retire as a Millionaire? Take This Quiz to Find Out…
Examples:
- The Easiest Way to Travel the World on a Shoestring Budget
- The Quick and Easy Way to Organize Your Closets
- The Quick and Easy Way to Get Rid of Computer Viruses
Summary
There you go – just swipe these 10 templates and you can turn your yawn-inducing headlines into eye-catchers that can’t be ignored by your audience and target market!
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